Sorry i haven't been able to post much. Its because I been very busy with homework and stuff like that. My computer hasn't been working at it's best either. Sorry to delay the posting of The Secret Jewel. I know you love my stories though. Ummmmm..... Oh yeah, yesterday someone sended me a letter on my e-mail:
SparklexLovesxYou,
I really love your stories! But, you never seem to post anymore. Maybe its because your busy....? I really hope you can post more of you stories! I really enjoy how Sky's plans backtrack, which makes the story seem longer! I really need to know what happens in the end! Please continue to post your stories!!!! I will always support you!!! Please reply!!! Maybe you could make me famous and post up my fan letter on blogger..... (:
-Your biggest fan, A.
Well, I had no idea my stories were that famous, but you made me feel more better. Here' my reply to you.
A,
Thanks so much for your words of encourangment I will continue to try my hardest to make The secret Jewel more intersting, so intersting that you can't wait till the next chapter comes out. Thanks for all the support.
-SparklexLovesxYou
If you would like to send me a fan letter, feel free. My e-mail is:
Sparkleangel12@yahoo.com
I'll try my hardest to post as much as I can! Thank you A, for your kind words of encouragment. See ya next time!!! (:
Saturday, May 28, 2011
Thursday, May 5, 2011
The Secret Jewel: Chapter Four- Happily ever after?
I looked around and saw a strange bird. I tapped Sky's shoulder and pointed at the strange bird.
Sky: Thats a Skybird.
Melody: Sky....bird....?
Sky: Yup, a Skybird
Melody: Where are we going now....?
Sky: To my father....
Melody: Ok!
SKY'S POV
I finally convinced her to come! Now all I have to do is to bring her to her father and we will live happily ever after.... Suddenly the ship was rumbling. I ran to the controls and checked to numbers/readings. I gasped inside my head. The numbers/readings were too high!
Sky: The numbers/readings are too high! We have to go down!
Melody: Ok.....
I looked at Melody. She just sat there looking out the window, staring at strange birds. I couldn't tell her that we might not survive. I took the chance. I landed the ship, but I crashed into a few trees. I looked out the window. Good, we landed the place where I wanted too before we went to meet my father.
Melody: Where are we?
I looked at her. She looked very exciting instead of scared.
Sky: We are at the Fairy School
Melody: Fairy School?
Sky: Yeah, some people found out that I found the found the princess of Music. They want to meet you
Melody: Wow.... So, im famous here?
Sky: Basiclly...
I saw a group of girld runs towards me.
???:Hi!
???: Hey!
???: Sup girl?
???: Welcome!
I blushed and waved.
Melody: Hi everyone....
Stella: My name is Stella! I don't really know anything about Magic really. I just came here to learn new things
Mary: My name is Mary. Im really here just because I want to learn more about my Magic
Lily: Name's Lily. You can call me Lil. I came here like the rest of them.
Violet: And Im Violet! You can find me using in the libary reading books.
Melody: My name is Melody. Im the princess of Music. Nice to meet all of you.
Lily looked at me, her eyes full of mischief. She grinned.
Lily: Yah know, you didn't come here on an accident.
Stella: We're gonna join you!
Mary: Stella! You weren't supposed to tell her! It doesn't matter anyway.
Violet: Our teacher told us that the princess of Music might need our help.
Sky: You don't know yet, but you have a secret powerful that can help you when you need help
Melody: Really? I got this! But where are we going next?
Sky: Red Fountain. My school, where we learn how to protect ourselves.
I put on my determine face on.
Melody: Let's go.
Sky: You know, those words sound familar to me.
Lily: Dude, we got no time to waste.
Stella: Lily! I hate you! You had to break up the romat-
Mary: Its all about love with you
Violet: Come on! Lets just get on the ship and talk there!
I smiled. A family. Seems like the teacher knew just what I wanted.
???: I will be watching you Melody, Princess of Music..............
Sky: Thats a Skybird.
Melody: Sky....bird....?
Sky: Yup, a Skybird
Melody: Where are we going now....?
Sky: To my father....
Melody: Ok!
SKY'S POV
I finally convinced her to come! Now all I have to do is to bring her to her father and we will live happily ever after.... Suddenly the ship was rumbling. I ran to the controls and checked to numbers/readings. I gasped inside my head. The numbers/readings were too high!
Sky: The numbers/readings are too high! We have to go down!
Melody: Ok.....
I looked at Melody. She just sat there looking out the window, staring at strange birds. I couldn't tell her that we might not survive. I took the chance. I landed the ship, but I crashed into a few trees. I looked out the window. Good, we landed the place where I wanted too before we went to meet my father.
Melody: Where are we?
I looked at her. She looked very exciting instead of scared.
Sky: We are at the Fairy School
Melody: Fairy School?
Sky: Yeah, some people found out that I found the found the princess of Music. They want to meet you
Melody: Wow.... So, im famous here?
Sky: Basiclly...
I saw a group of girld runs towards me.
???:Hi!
???: Hey!
???: Sup girl?
???: Welcome!
I blushed and waved.
Melody: Hi everyone....
Stella: My name is Stella! I don't really know anything about Magic really. I just came here to learn new things
Mary: My name is Mary. Im really here just because I want to learn more about my Magic
Lily: Name's Lily. You can call me Lil. I came here like the rest of them.
Violet: And Im Violet! You can find me using in the libary reading books.
Melody: My name is Melody. Im the princess of Music. Nice to meet all of you.
Lily looked at me, her eyes full of mischief. She grinned.
Lily: Yah know, you didn't come here on an accident.
Stella: We're gonna join you!
Mary: Stella! You weren't supposed to tell her! It doesn't matter anyway.
Violet: Our teacher told us that the princess of Music might need our help.
Sky: You don't know yet, but you have a secret powerful that can help you when you need help
Melody: Really? I got this! But where are we going next?
Sky: Red Fountain. My school, where we learn how to protect ourselves.
I put on my determine face on.
Melody: Let's go.
Sky: You know, those words sound familar to me.
Lily: Dude, we got no time to waste.
Stella: Lily! I hate you! You had to break up the romat-
Mary: Its all about love with you
Violet: Come on! Lets just get on the ship and talk there!
I smiled. A family. Seems like the teacher knew just what I wanted.
???: I will be watching you Melody, Princess of Music..............
TO BE CONTINUED..........
Who is this mysterious person? Who will they meet in Red Fountian? Find out in Chapter Five....
Monday, May 2, 2011
The Secret Jewel: Chapter Three-The ride to the "Land of Music"
I looked at Sky carefully. His eyes were so wide and full of concern. I almost felt protected under them.
Sky:What's wrong
I lean in close and whispered in his ear.
Melody:Meet me at the movies. I need to ask you something important.
Sky's POV
I looked not her eyes and they were ugret. I nodded. When I turned around, I saw three girls glaring at her. I almost jumped to her defense, but she just turned around and inorged them. I was amazed. A princess who isn't afraid of anything! When the day pasted, I got ready to go to the movies. The three girls stopped me.
Random girl 1: Stay away from Melody
Random girl 2: Yeah! Whats so different about her, compared to us?
Sky:She is already different. Shes brave and almost everything I can think of. What's wrong with that?
Random girl 3: We want you to "not like" Melody. She's so Tomboyish! Why can't you just give up on her?!?
I can hear every word their saying. My eyes begin to tear up. This was just like the time my fatehr was fighting with my mother. I opened the door and ran past them.
Melody: Stop! Don't fight!
Random girl 2: What's wrong with you?!?
Sky: Melody? Are you alright?
Melody: The prince of the Sky doesn't need to worry about me.
I was misarable. I began crying. I wiped the tears from my eyes and continued.
Melody: I don't need to go and tend to my father. You can just go back to your world and say I won't come back.
As I was about to leave, Sky took my hand and hugged me. I just continued to cry on his shoulder.
Sky: Don't worry. I promised I take care of you and now I am.
Random girl 1: Prince of the sky? What kind of stupid nonsense if that?!?!?
They made Melody cry and now this?!?!
Sky: Get away from here.
Random girl 3:Fine then!
The three girls left. I looked at my watch. The movie was over. I sighed. So much for the "go-to-the-movies-and-talk" operation.
Sky:Tell me, how do you know about me being the prince.
Melody:Your book. So is it true that you really fell in love with me??
When I asked him the last question her blushed and looked away.
Sky:Maybe.
I poked him in the cheek and smiled.
Melody:So don't you want me to come back with you?
Sky:That would be great. If you agree, my princess.
Melody:What are we waiting for then?
I gently took her hand and walked her to my ship. There I drove to the "Land of Music". The place where Melody could finally see her parents again.
Sky:What's wrong
I lean in close and whispered in his ear.
Melody:Meet me at the movies. I need to ask you something important.
Sky's POV
I looked not her eyes and they were ugret. I nodded. When I turned around, I saw three girls glaring at her. I almost jumped to her defense, but she just turned around and inorged them. I was amazed. A princess who isn't afraid of anything! When the day pasted, I got ready to go to the movies. The three girls stopped me.
Random girl 1: Stay away from Melody
Random girl 2: Yeah! Whats so different about her, compared to us?
Sky:She is already different. Shes brave and almost everything I can think of. What's wrong with that?
Random girl 3: We want you to "not like" Melody. She's so Tomboyish! Why can't you just give up on her?!?
I can hear every word their saying. My eyes begin to tear up. This was just like the time my fatehr was fighting with my mother. I opened the door and ran past them.
Melody: Stop! Don't fight!
Random girl 2: What's wrong with you?!?
Sky: Melody? Are you alright?
Melody: The prince of the Sky doesn't need to worry about me.
I was misarable. I began crying. I wiped the tears from my eyes and continued.
Melody: I don't need to go and tend to my father. You can just go back to your world and say I won't come back.
As I was about to leave, Sky took my hand and hugged me. I just continued to cry on his shoulder.
Sky: Don't worry. I promised I take care of you and now I am.
Random girl 1: Prince of the sky? What kind of stupid nonsense if that?!?!?
They made Melody cry and now this?!?!
Sky: Get away from here.
Random girl 3:Fine then!
The three girls left. I looked at my watch. The movie was over. I sighed. So much for the "go-to-the-movies-and-talk" operation.
Sky:Tell me, how do you know about me being the prince.
Melody:Your book. So is it true that you really fell in love with me??
When I asked him the last question her blushed and looked away.
Sky:Maybe.
I poked him in the cheek and smiled.
Melody:So don't you want me to come back with you?
Sky:That would be great. If you agree, my princess.
Melody:What are we waiting for then?
I gently took her hand and walked her to my ship. There I drove to the "Land of Music". The place where Melody could finally see her parents again.
TO BE CONTINUED...
In the next chapter find out what will happen. Will this be the end of the story??
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